Sunday, November 9, 2008

Coitus (non)interruptus

Inspired by Savvy and A son of his mother, I have decided not to be left behind by the erotica bandwagon, so I jump on by throwing in this piece of eroticaesque lame poetry. I don’t know which is worse the poetry or the content. Here’s to hoping that some myopic, holier-than-thou human will attempt to chastise this entry. I won’t even put a disclaimer; Loco is spoiling for a fight.

Spicy
Like freshly ground pepper
Heat blazing
Thawing, melting
Icy heart to river
Wet, soaked
Flames Licking
Cataclysmic
Frantic tugging
Stretching, filling
Tension
Like a tightly drawn string
Approaching nirvana
Floodgates open
Screams
Explosive
Like Hiroshima gone ballistic
All inside
Tremors
6.2 Richter scale
Twitch
Sigh
Cigarette lit

Soundtrack:
Fever - Ray Charles ft Natalie cole

3 comments:

S said...

Lol!!! Interesting...Who the hell would want to condemn this one?? Hehehehe

Loco said...

Hehe, I din't read Mills and Boons in high school so this is the best I could come up with! 'Kuchochea lazima!'

SupremeGREAM said...

You have way with words too I see. What impresses me is, you chose few words and still drove the nail home! Damn!